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my homework about famous play :)
could you help me please in my homework .. I wrote the text but I need you to correct my grammar and spelling mistake.
King Laius king of Thebes had married and but did was not able to produce an offspring. beget (beget isn't too used of a word) He went to the temple of Delphi (Greek temple explore the him prophecies) to know find out the solution to his problem. came to him The divination prophecy (the prophecy divination of God Obollon) told him that he will beget have a child that will kill his father and marry his mother, but Lajos was annoyed by to this prophecy and went back deported to his home. and the abandonment of He told his wife so as not to beget then visits due to being intoxicated carried his wife feared King of a prophecy wait even has her birth and when she eventually gave birth, they gave the child and gave to his guard. In order to kill him, and they went by to the mountain which is restricted shackled him by his feet. (and this explains the mystery of the play Naming Oedipus, which means ancient Greek unrestricted handcuffs) Rather than deliver in the mountain to die left to offset taken into account in this mountain, and have pity on the child's sponsor and take care of him.(Confusing sentence)
Thank you for sharing your work on Oedipus!
Your sentence structure seems confusing, but I tried to correct as best I can. I recommend to please use more periods in your sentences so that they are not run on! If you start by adding more periods then your writing will make more sense to the reader as well as yourself. Best of luck!
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