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You wrote a good essay but try to pay more attention in using verb tenses.

~~Charlie

What happened to me in Spain 2.

>> What I experienced in Spain II

Most of time in Spain , I traveled south parts of spain but for new year , I went to Madrid with my sister and her friends .

>> For most of my travels to Spain, I usually go to the southern parts but for the New Year's, I went to Madrid with my sister and her friends.

Before two day from new year we arrived at madrid , though we struggled to find guest house we reserved , we satisfied there because that house was nice and owner was so kind .

>> We arrived in Madrid two days before the New Year's and we had a hard time looking for the guest house we rented although it was okay since the house was nice and the owner was indeed kind.

Next day , we made salchichon sandwiches and ate them as breakfast then went to plaza mayor . We looked around there and enjoyed it .

>> The following day, we made Salchichón sandwiches for breakfast then went to the plaza mayor where we had a good time looking around.

Finally , the night was comed and we bought 12 green grapes each other . Because there is traditional thing (?) in Spain.

>> Finally, night came and each of us bought 12 grapes because it was the tradition in Spain.

In new year , people who are in plaza mayor have to eat 12 of them before finishing the clock bell of 12 . If failed it , they say you couldn't have luck that year . I wanted to get a lot of luck haha so ate all of them before it .

>> The tradition is that during the New Year's, anyone who was in the town plaza or plaza mayor must eeat 12 grapes before the clock strikes 12 for them to have good luck in the coming year. I wanted to get a lot of luck so I ate all of the grapes before midnight.

Then everypeople was screaming and greeting to everyone .

>>  The clock struck midnight and everyone was screaming and greeting one another.

It is really nice experience to me and want to go there in every new year . Hope go to spain again after saving money :)

>> It was a really nice experience for me and I would like to come back for every New Year's day. I hope to return to Spain after saving some money.