Travelling, one of my hobby hobbies

Today I would  like to talk about one of my hobbies, travelling. Actually, I am a person with various hobbies and interests. The more you experience, the more wonderful your life is.
God creates gorgeous works, such as magnificent mountains, impressive rivers, and seas. What's more, historical buildings are the essence of human‘s culture. I really like the feeling that you would feel when you are actually in the story when you go to the places that you read about in the book.
Travelling is not only about enjoying scenery  (scenery is already plural) and architectures, but also is about a precious experience exploring (touching seems a little strange) different cultures. You can know meet more different people,who have different world views and thinkings of life thoughts on life, which is why it's interesting to talk with them，and it's just like a fresh infusion of thought into my brain, and my horizons will become wider.

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Thank you.

GREAT!

Remember, if you list things: use commas for three or more things, and use 'and' at the end.

"If you decide to visit the United States, you'll see large cities, vast deserts, huge forests, and beautiful rivers."

Travelling, one of my hobby hobbies

Today I would like to talk about one of my hobbies, travelling. Actually, I am a person with various hobbies and interests. The more you experience, the more wonderful your life is.
God creates gorgeous works, such as magnificent mountains, impressive rivers and seas. What's more, historical buildings are the essence of human‘s culture. I really like the feeling that where you would feel like you are actually in the story when you go to where you have read in the a book.
Travelling is not only to enjoy sceneries and architectures, but it also is a precious experience to touch different culture. You can know more many different people who are with have different world views and thinkings ideas of life. that's It's interesting to talk with them.which is just like  It puts something fresh to infuse into my brain, and my horrizon horizons would also become wider.
-----That is it. I will continue to finish this article next time.
Wish friends here to help me correct it. (*^__^*)
Thank you.

Thank you for sharing, I love travelling as well!