The first one

hello! I come from hangzhou.It is a beautiful city in china.I love itthe city! West Lake is a famous attractions  .

The first one

hello! I come from hangzhou.It is a beautiful city in china.I love it! West Lake is a famous lake .I want to learn english well,not a poor english. So I am glad to chat in english. And my chinese is very well, if you want to learn chinese you can ask me.
大家好，这是我的第一篇小作文，我来自中国杭州，这是一个美丽的城市，在这个城市里有著名的西湖。对西湖的一切我都很熟悉，因为我从小生活在西湖边。
我想学好英语，能说一口流利正确的英语是我的梦想。如果你的英语很好，欢迎你和我聊天，另外我的中文非常好，如果学中文有不懂的可以尽管问我。