About me

Good job! Your writing is very clear and easy to understand.  I'm so impressed that you learned Norwegian. That sounds really hard! Good luck with your upcoming exam.

**  Remember that actually = de hecho.  :)

** Parents-in-law = the parents of your spouse. My sister's in-laws = the family of my sister's husband.

Hey Yanina!

The first post has already covered almost everything, here are some minor additions:

(I am not going to repeat the previous corrections.)

About me

Hi!
I'm Yanina, I'm 29 years old, Argentinian and I live in Buenos Aires.
I'm graphic designer. Actually I'm working as art director, and I enjoy my job.
Actually I take english and german lessons, but I'm interested to pass an international test (TOELF for example) to certificate my english level. For this reason, I want to talk and write every day. I will have an english exam the next month, so I have to study a little bit harder during the following/coming* weeks.
My sister lives in Switzerland, in the german region, so I would like to speak german to talk with my brother in law and his family, too. It's a challenge, but I think that it would be great to speak with my parents in law without people between us!
I lived in Norway for one year, I learned Norwegian in this period of time. When I came to Buenos Aires, I started to learn german and I realised that german and Norwegian are very similar languages, and also very different from Spanish.
Thanks for your help!
Yanina

*I am not 100% sure on this one. However, I feel like "next" is only appropriate if you're talking about a single upcoming week, not multiple ones. It might be technically correct, but "following" or "coming" would still be more natural stylistic choices.

Espero que te haya ayudado! Hasta pronto! :)