My hobbies Hello Today, I will talk about my hobbies. 1)travelling I've been to Taiwan, Germany, Belgium, Netherlands and France. I will going to Thailand next January! 2)listening to music

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My hobbies Hello Today, I will talk about my hobbies. 1)travelling I've been to Taiwan, Germany, Belgium, Netherlands and France. I will going to Thailand next January! 2)listening to music I like Adam Lambert. I always go to his concert in Japan. And Japanese rock I like too. 3)cooking I often cook Japanese traditional dishes. For example Nimono, miso soup, and more. Please check my sentence.

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Dear Mr.Jeff Thank you for your comment! I'll do my best. Best regards.

My hobbies

Hello

Hello! (Hello <name>,)

Today, I will talk about my hobbies.

Today I will talk about my hobbies. (unnecessary comma (though, it's not wrong with the comma!))

1)travelling
I've been to Taiwan, Germany, Belgium, (The) Netherlands and France.
I will going to Thailand next January!

I will go to Thailand next January!

2)listening to music
I like Adam Lambert. I always go to his concert in Japan.
And Japanese rock I like too.

And I like Japanese rock too.

3)cooking
I often cook Japanese traditional dishes. For example Nimono, miso soup, and more.

Please check my sentence.

Please check my sentences.

Well written, Mio-san! I would like some miso soup. ^^
Don't hesitate to ask any questions about the corrections.

よろしくおねがいします

Just one small thing -- I will be going to Thailand next January -- Every thing else is great! :)

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