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My hometown. Could you help me correct the mistake? I am from Dalian, a beautiful city in Liaoning province. It is not only a famous tourism city, but Chairman Jianzemin calls Dalian “the pearl of Northern China” and the officer of Chinese bureau of tourism calls Dalian “the capital of romantic”. There are great scenes here, Star-Sea Park, Tiger Beach, Ice Valley and so on. Each year, many people come here for tour and investment. There is a touching folklore about Tiger Beach. It is a love story about a hunter and a beautiful girl. They fell in love at first sight. A tiger demon lusted after the charming of the girl and possessed her. The hunter vowed to take his lover back. After a fierce battle, the hunter killed the tiger, but he lost his fair lady forever. Now in Tiger Beach Park, people still could find tiger cave and sharply-cut rocks. In one word, Dalian is a beautiful city and I like it very much.

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My hometown. Could you help me correct the mistake?

I am from Dalian, a beautiful city in Liaoning province. It is not only a famous tourism tourist city, but Chairman Jianzemin calls Dalian “the pearl of Northern China” and the officer of the Chinese bureau of tourism calls Dalian “the capital of romance”. There are great scenes here, Star-Sea Park, Tiger Beach, Ice Valley and so on. Each year, many people visit here for tourism and investment opportunities. There is a touching folklore about Tiger Beach. It is a love story about a hunter and a beautiful girl. They fell in love at first sight. A tiger demon lusted after the charming of the girl and possessed her. The hunter vowed to take his lover back. After a fierce battle, the hunter killed the tiger, but he lost his fair lady forever. Now in Tiger Beach Park, people still could can still find Tiger Cave and sharply-cut rocks. In one word short, Dalian is a beautiful city and I like it very much.

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