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Can you correct my mistakes? I'm sure that I have a lot of things which I have to improve. I've never been in a cabin ( I don't know if it's the right word, I'm talking about these little and cozy houses which are normally in places like a mountain, for example ). Anyway, I would like to be in one of these cozy cabins. It would be so amazing... with a fireplace and in the winter. In addition, I would like to stay in a place where there are amounts of snow. At this moment I'm imagining me in, and I can see a beatiful and a big Christmas tree. These could be the perfect holidays with your friends, or your boyfriend, maybe. Couldn't it?

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Can you correct my mistakes? I'm sure that I have many a lot of things which I have need to improve. Not wrong but would be better if you are writing formal in an exam etc.

 

I've never been in a cabin ( I don't know if it's the right word, I'm talking about these little and cozy houses which are normally situated in places like a mountain, for example Correct word). Anyway, I would like to be in one of these cozy cabins. It would be so amazing... with A [roaring] fireplace and in the during winter and . In addition, I would like to stay in a place where there are amounts plenty of snow outside. [This is so much concise] At this moment I'm imagining me in, myself in there. and I can see a beautiful and a big large Christmas tree -- These could be the a perfect holidays with your friends, or your boyfriend, maybe. Couldn't it?

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At this moment I'm imagining me in, and myself in there.  I can see a beautiful and a big large Christmas tree. These could be the -- a perfect holidays setting with your friends, or perhaps with that someone special your boyfriend, maybe. Couldn't it?  Anything is possible.

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