An evening with the friends
The other day when i finished my university classes, i decided with my friends go out to dinner in some bar in Madrid.
At the beginning we didn´t know where go and finally we went to a bar with many people inside, because of this bar was recommended us by an old friends.
There was many "tapas" , a spanish names that we use to refer a littel piece of bread with some food above, and all decided for the same type of tapa which was delicius.
After these bar we decided go to another and in this case the bar was with less people but had a fied eggs which all my friends and i finished it in one minute.
When we already hadn´t hungry we decided stop of eat and go to a pub to dance a littel.
There was a good evening.
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An evening with the friends
The other day when I finished my university classes, I decided with my friends to go out to for dinner in at some bar in Madrid.
At the beginning we didn´t know where to go and finally we went to a bar with many people inside, because of this bar which was recommended to us by an old friends (or "by old friends").
There were was many "tapas" , which is a Spanish names that we use to refer to a small littel piece of bread with some food on top above. and all Everyone decided to go for the same type of tapa which was delicious.
After these bar we decided to go to another one. and in this case the bar This one was with had less people, but had a there were fried eggs which all my friends and I finished it in one minute.
When we were already full, hadn´t hungry we decided to stop of eating and go to a pub to dance a littel little.
There It was a good evening.
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An evening with the friends
The other day when i finished my university classes, I decided with my friends go out to dinner at some bar in Madrid.
At the beginning we didn´t know where to go and finally we went to a bar with many people inside, because this bar was recommended us by an old friends.
There were many "tapas" , it's a spanish name that we use to refer a littel piece of bread with some food above, and all decided for the same type of tapa which was delicious.
After the bar we decided go to another and in this case the bar was with less people but had a fied eggs which all my friends and I finished in one minute.
When we were already full we decided stop of eating and go to a pub to dance a littel.
That was a good evening.
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Nice job but just remember that in English we always write a single (i) when you refer to yourself like an upper case letter so it's ALWAYS an upper case letter :))
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