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My job is electronic business Now my job is an electronic businessman.Every morning I go to the office and open the window. Log in the Alibaba and other instant software like skype.I search my e-mail to find anymail unread in it. Then I write the scheme today.Which time to do anything. If I have free during the work,I will search the Internet to read the news.

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Now I’m working as (my job is = In English is is more common to say “I work as …..” or “I’m working as an/ a …..”, we don’t say ‘job’ in this context. “I have a job in electronics” might be better) an electronic businessman. Every morning I go to the office and turn the computer on and open the internet. .


Log into Alibaba and other instant software like skype. I search my e-mail to find any unread mail. (‘unread’ in this context can be used as an adjective)


Then I write the schedule for today. I plan my day based on what I have to do.


If I have free time during work (‘the’ is omitted because ‘work’ in this sentence is a verb, not a noun), I will search the Internet and read the news (not all verbs in English require ‘to’ in front of them, the verb implies that ‘you are/ someone is doing something).


** “Every morning I go to the office and open the window. “ = In this context does ‘open the window’ mean to ‘physically’ open a window to let air in OR open a new window in the internet browser? In everyday English people would be confused by this, because most people don’t say ‘open a window’ to refer to the internet. You can just say ‘open the internet’


** “Which time to do anything” = In everyday English, this sentence is considered ‘reduntant’ (i.e not needed) because the previous sentence implies that you will be ‘planning activities’. So you don’t need this sentence OR you could state what you are planning (lunch with the boss or meeting). 

 

Hope this helps, if you have any questions feel free to ask me :)

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