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This is excercise of writteing. If we can read the others' mind, we would lose almost of all relationship. All of us are a liar not only to harm the others, but also to maintain our relation peacefully. To tell a hash reality sometimes would harm a participant. Therefore, the ability to read the others' mind would be like a terrible curse which breaks out our relationship.

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This is an writing exercise

If we can read one another's mind, we would lose almost of all relationships.

All of us are liars. Lies not only to harms others, but also help to maintain peaceful relations.

To tell a harsh reality sometimes would harm people.

Therefore, the ability to read the other's mind would be like(as) a terrible curse which would cause breaks in our relationships.

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This is a writing exercise.

If we could read the others' minds, we would lose almost all of our relationships.

All of us lie not only to harm others, but also to maintain our relationships peacefully.

To tell a harsh reality sometimes would harm a person.

Therefore, the ability to read the others' mind would be like a terrible curse which breaks our relationships.

 

 

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グッジョブ!!わずかあやまりです。私の日本語悪い、すみません。がんばれ!:)

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This is excercise of writteing.

If we could read the others' minds, we would lose almost of all relationships.

All of us are a liars. Not only to harm them, but also to maintain our relations peacefully.

To tell a harsh reality sometimes would harm a participant.

Therefore, the ability to read the others' mind would be like a terrible curse which would breaks out our relationship.

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