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I guess that is what you are trying to say
Sometimes I feel lonely, I don’t know why? It is either I have lots of free time to think or have no one to share things with. It could be the impact of the bad weather as well. Once I had a good friend. We used to play different games every day after school, such as, skipping rope, hide-and-seek etc. We used to sleep and eat together that was the happiest time of life, but now I have got admitted to a college in Hebei province, which is far away from my home, whereas she has gone to another city to study fashion designing. I don’t know whether she is happy there or not because I haven’t met her for a long time. I miss her a lot. I can’t find a friend like her
I have been living alone for a long time, I miss her so much. I feel sad and lonely without her. I will remember her forever.
I hope we both have a happy life. Sometimes I feel lonely
Sometimes I feel lonely, I don't know why .maybe I am free or I have no one to take to or just the weather is bad .once I have a good friend ,we talk everything to each other and we play after school everyday such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek. We sleep together and go to the other side's house to have a meal .but now I go to college in hebei province while she is study clothes-design in another city .i have not meet her a long time I don't know whether she is living happily.i miss her a lot and the happiest time in my life and I can't find a friend like her any more .
Living alone a long time ,whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. i will remenber her forever
I hope we both happy everyday and live a happiness life
Sometimes I feel lonely, I don't know why .maybe I am free or I have no one to take to or just the weather is bad .once I have a good friend ,we talk everything to each other and we play after school everyday such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek. We sleep together and go to the other side's house to have a meal .but now I go to college in hebei province while she is study clothes-design in another city .i have not meet her a long time I don't know whether she is living happily.i miss her a lot and the happiest time in my life and I can't find a friend like her any more .
Living alone a long time, whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. i will remenber her forever
I hope we both happy everyday and live a happiness life
1. Please always put full stop at the end of a sentence, not at the beginning of next sentence.
2. After full stop, when you start a new sentence the first letter of the first word of a sentence is always capital
3. We capitalize first person pronoun 'I' even if it does not appear in the beginning of a sentence.
4. Continents, regions, countries, states, counties, cities and towns are always capitalized, according to that rule Hebei should be capitalized
Sometimes I feel lonely, I don't know why, maybe I am free or I have no one to talk to or just the weather is bad. Once I have a good friend, we talk everything to each other and we play after school everyday such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek. We sleep together and go to the other side's house to have a meal, but now I go to college in Hebei province while she is studying clothes-design in another city. I have not met her for a long time; I don't know whether she is living happily. I miss her lot and the happiest time in my life and I can't find a friend like her any more.
Living alone a long time, whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. I will remember her forever
I hope we both happy everyday and live a happy life
Sometimes I feel lonely
Sometimes I feel lonely, i don't know why .May be i am free or i have no one to talk or just the weather is bad .Once i had a good friend ,we talk everything to each other and we play after school everyday such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek. We sleep together and go to the other side's house to have a meal .But now i go to college in hebei province while she is study clothes-design in another city .I have not met her a long time. I don't know whether she is living happily.I am missing her a lot and the happiest time i had in my life and I can't find a friend like her any more .
Living alone a long time ,whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. i will remenber her forever
I hope we both happy everyday and live a happiness life.
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