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I'm going to talk about why I chose to study at this univ.
There is are always economic problems in people's lives.
Therefore, I thought that it is necessary to learn study the economics in order to improve the world.
(learnは能力・技・直接使えることにふさわしいです。この広い知識の分野にはstudyのほうがいいです。)
Business administration and information since and if this university to learn.
(たくさんのエラーが入っているため、意味がわからないです。)
And, it is possible to learn practical English.
Can not it at other univ.
I could not have done all these things at another university.
(文法が複雑になってすみません。可能性を比べるにはcouldは便利です。過去にあった決断でしたからpresent perfectを使いました。)
So, I chose this university.
Studied After I finish studying at this university, I want to be a programmer to build a system that takes advantage of what you have learned.
(文法があっているが、これはどういうシステムかわからないです。)
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