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waiting In our life ,i believe everyone waited for somebody. Maybe the one you loved or the one who love you.for me ,I am waiting for the one I loved deeply and I also hope more and more people will love me because everyone need love . Is it right? It is worth to wait . Today, I spend much time waiting for a stranger, which make me a little angry . He asked me to borrow my computer to him and I told him the time to meet but he was late. I do not feel very well , which tell us keep time To my surprise , I am willing to wait for my love . Maybe I would be happy when he or she appear. In a word , there have someone worth us to wait.

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waiting

In our life ,i believe everyone waited for somebody. Maybe the one you loved or the one who love you.for me ,I am waiting for the one I loved deeply and I also hope more and more people will love me because everyone need love . Is it right? It is worth to wait .
Today, I spend much time waiting for a stranger, which make me a little angry . He asked me to borrow my computer to him and I told him the time to meet but he was late. I do not feel very well , which tell us keep time
To my surprise , I am willing to wait for my love . Maybe I would be happy when he or she appear. In a word , there have someone worth us to wait.


1. Waiting

2. May be the one to whom you would love or someone who would love you

3. I am waiting for the one to whom I will love deeply

4. needs

5. spent

6. no need to use ''to him''

 

There are still few corrections need to be made in terms of grammar. Also, some changes are required to convey the correct meaning

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In our life, I believe everyone is waiting [present prog] for somebody. Maybe the one you loved or the one who loved you [past]. For me, I am waiting for the one I loved deeply and I also hope more and more people will love me, because everyone needs love. Is it right? Is it worth it to wait?
Today I spent much time [past] waiting for a stranger, which makes me a little angry. He asked me if he could borrow my computer and I told him the time and place to meet, but he was late [more natural]. I do not feel very well. Which tell us keep time [??].
To my surprise, I am willing to wait for my love. Maybe I would be happy when he or she appears. In a sentence, there has to be someone worthy for us to wait for.

Comments:
‘believe everyone waited for somebody’ – waiting (is better, present progressive tense. Waited – is past tense, already done something)


‘It is worth to wait’ – Sounds like a question, so I would say “Is it worth it to wait?”


‘He asked me to borrow my computer to him’ – I understand what you mean, It is more natural to say “He asked me to borrow my computer”, you do not have to say ‘to him’, as ‘to borrow = to borrow something FROM someone, the meaning is implied’


‘Which tell us keep time’ – I’m sorry I don’t know what you mean.


‘In a word’ – literally means in ‘one word’. Because you gave a ‘sentence’, I changed the words. In English, it is very common to say “In a nutshell” “in Short” “To cut a long sentence short…”. These all are interchangeable.

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great hope you finding your love soon have a nice day :)
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I think you never mind about it .Have a nice day :)

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