A summary of a text I have to do for english class
An Airports Council International's study shows that between 2013 and 2014 there has been a lot of changes in the flights that people take all over the word. It compares how before people used to travel a lot more to the West and now it seems that tourism in the East has increase a lot in the past couple years. This is proved by giving real stadistics about how Jakarta's, Beijing's and Dubai's airport have taken important spots in the busiest airport's chart and making some of the ones that used to be the busiest (like Chicago and Los Angeles) take a step back to a more lower spot (in most cases) that the one they used to be before.
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A summary of a text I have to do for english class
An Airports Council International's study shows that between 2013 and 2014 there has been a lot of changes in the flights that people take all over the word. It compares how before people used to travel a lot more to the West and now it seems that tourism in the East has increased a lot in the past couple years. This is proved by giving real statistics about how Jakarta's, Beijing's and Dubai's airports have taken important spots in the busiest airport's chart and making some of the ones that used to be the busiest (like Chicago and Los Angeles) take a step back to a more lower spot (in most cases) than the one they used to be/have (mejor) before.
Airports Council International's-- esto probablemente no esté correcto pero no sé el nombre de esta organizción. An International Airport Council's study....
busiest airports charts-- de nuevo, no sé, pero "on the charts of the world's busiest airports" suena un poco más fluidez. Por lo general muy bien escrito.
past couple years--ok, un poco colloquial.
past couple OF years--más formal
more lower- inglés no usa dobles comparativos. dice "lower"
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