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In this country, approximately 1 million people cannot hear optimally and Society X believes that 150’000 of them cannot have a correct phone call. Society X wants to offer to their customers, who have hearing problems, a new system which will be able to modify the audio stream in real time to adapt it specifically for each customer suffering from hearing reduction.
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My first essay First Essay
In this country (As readers, we would want to know which country you are talking about), approximately 1 million people cannot hear optimally, and Society X believes that 150,000 of them cannot have hear during a correct phone call. Society X wants to offer to their customers, who have hearing problems, a new system which will be able to modify the audio stream in real time to adapt it specifically for each customer who has hearing problems. suffering from hearing reduction.
Not a bad start Cyrill, this technology sounds very interesting! There were just a few corrections I made, if you would like help practicing and improving your English, I’d be happy to help you! If you have any questions, please let me know.
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