Corrections · 2
I am a poem
I am shy but I am strong too
I wonder why do they suffer?
I hear the soft purr of a cat
I see the shadow of a box
I want to save all of them
I am shy but I am strong too
I pretend to help them as much as I can
I feel the pain in their eyes
I touch their souls every time they leave
I worry about clouds and rain
I cry when they pass away
I am shy but I am strong too
I understand that I do what I can
I say that I will meet them again crossing the rainbow
I dream about a forever home for all of them
I try to make their dreams come true
I hope for a better life for them
I am shy but I am strong too.
I am not sure what you mean with
"I see the shadow of a box"
It is correct, but how does it fit in your poem.
Can you describe it in a non poetic way ?
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