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I am a poem I am shy but I am strong too I wonder why do they suffer? I hear the soft purr of a cat I see the shadow of a box I want to save all of them I am shy but I am strong too I pretend to help them as much as I can I feel the pain in their eyes I touch their souls every time they leave I worry about could and rain I cry when they pass away I am shy but I am strong too I undestand that I do what I can I say that I will meet them again crossing the rainbow I dream about a forever home for all of them I try to make their dreams come true I hope a better life for them I am shy but I am strong too.

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I am a poem

I am shy but I am strong too
I wonder why do they suffer?
I hear the soft purr of a cat
I see the shadow of a box 
I want to save all of them
I am shy but I am strong too
I pretend to help them as much as I can
I feel the pain in their eyes
I touch their souls every time they leave
I worry about clouds and rain
I cry when they pass away
I am shy but I am strong too
I understand that I do what I can
I say that I will meet them again crossing the rainbow
I dream about a forever home for all of them
I try to make their dreams come true
I hope for a better life for them
I am shy but I am strong too.

 

I am not sure what you mean with

"I see the shadow of a box"

It is correct, but how does it fit in your poem.

Can you describe it in a non poetic way ?

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