Beach

I love beaches and fortunately I live in Rio. There are many awesome beaches here. I don't know why, but when I am on the beach I feel at peace. I would like to have much more time to going to the beach but the university has takes almost all my time. During the summer when I'm on vacation, I try to go at least every weekend with my friends. My favorite beach is Grumari. It's a bit far from my home but I love going there. That's one of many reasons I love my city. :)

Beach

I love beaches and fortunately I live in Rio. There are many awesome beaches here.

I love beaches and fortunately I live in Rio, where there are many awesome beaches.

I don't know why but when I am on the  beach I feel at peace. I would like to have much more time to going go to the beach but the university has almost all of my time. During the summer when I'm on vacation I try to go at least every weekend with my friends. My favorite beach is Grumari. It's a bit far from my home but I love going there. That's one of the many reasons I love my city. :)

I love beaches and fortunately I live in Rio. There are many awesome beaches here. I don't know why, but when I am on the beach/one of the beaches (1) I feel at peace. I would like to have much more time to going to the beach , but the university has takes (2) almost all my time. During the summer when I'm on vacation , I try to go (3) at least every weekend with my friends. My favorite beach is Grumari. It's a bit far from my home but I love going there. That's/it is (4)one of many reasons I love my city. :) 

(1) Mencionou uma praia conhecida, ou uma das prajas na sua cidade.

(2) ... leva muito tempo...

(3) Neste caso precisa usar o infinitivo do verbo.

(4) Possível também.

Desejo que tenha um bom estudo!