A little about me

Hi. My name is Emin. I live in Irkutsk (Russia, Siberia). I have been living here since March of 2005. Before it that I lived in Azerbaijan.  I had lived in Azerbaijan since from when I was born and until 2005. When I arrived Irkutsk I didn't know Russian. I spent 5 years on studying the Russian language. Then I my Russian improved.
Although I was studying English at school and at college until May of 2015 I didn't know English. I couldn't even say "who is I am", "where I am from", or "how old I am". In May of 2015 I began to learn English. I am learning with help from video lessons on YouTube. The 25th of August I was recorded on English classes. I had decided to take English classes.

{I'm not sure what you mean here. You've decided to record your English lessons?}

I think it will help me in studying English. And I think on I will spend less time studying English  than I spent on studying Russian.

{good job}

A little about me

Hi. My name is Emin. I live in Irkutsk (Russia, Siberia). I have been living here since March of 2005. Before it thatI lived in Azerbaijan. I lived in Azerbaijan from when I was born until 2005. In Azerbaijan I had lived since when I was born and until 2005. When I arrived in Irkutsk I didn't know Russian. I spent 5 years no studying the Russian language. Then I improved my Russian.
Although I was studying English at school and at college until May of 2015 I didn't really know English. I couldn't even say who I was, where I came from or how old I was (sorry, I lost your original phrase there!) In May of 2015 I began to really learn English. I am learning with thehelp of video lessons on YouTube. The 25th of August I enrolled in English classes. I had decided to take English classes. I think it they will help me in studying English. And I think on studying english I will spend less time studying English than I spent on studying Russian.

Here I am (David)! It looks pretty good - I will just do a few changes to it - as above.

So, what do you thing, Emin. Not too bad, eh? Maybe I should just point out:

"Who am I?"   ------    I don't know who I am.

He said, "Who am I?"   ------    He said that he didn't know who he was.

Do you understand what I am trying to point out in these last two lines?

Dave