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My life.
I was married when I was 22. It was an very early marriage compared to my friends. After I graduated University in February, I made up it in April. That time Then I just followed what my honey wanted. I believed that he would be more mature than me. Because we have 7 years gap. He wanted to marry soon at that time and now it's been 22 years past. Sometimes I regret for losing my 20s. I did not get any chance to make achieve my dream. I had to focus on growing raising my children. I always advice to my daughters like this " First of all, try to make your dream"
I hope that my daugters will be more independent than me. But I do not regret whole my whole life. I am satisfied with current my current life. I know that when I choose one thing, there is another side at the some time. If I did not marry then, I might have regretted that too. I think life is very interesting. I really wonder what will happen to me. There is only one thing I can do and that is to spend a every single day pleasantly.
Notes: Most English speakers use the verb "got". When I was at school, my English teacher hated using that verb. It was the unwary student that used it.
So "I got married when i was 22" -> "I was married when I was 22"
But you were not wrong to use "got" , it is just my early schooling kicking in. :-)
Make sure to use I instead of i when referring to yourself.
I made up it in April -- not sure what you mean here.
my honey - unusual usage in written form for an English speaker, it is more common when speaking.
more mature -- you are making a comparison so you use words like - more, less, almost as
Because we have 7 years gap - I know what you mean here. You could also use "because we have an age difference of seven years"
or "because he is seven years older than me". Notice that I wrote seven instead of the charachter 7 - that is preferred in writing.
and now it's been 22 years past. I removed the full stop at the end of the previous sentence, and is a connector so it joins the two sentences. I also removed past.
You normally see just " and now it's been 22 years" . You could also write "and now 22 years have passed"
There is only one thing I can do and that is to spend a every single day pleasantly. In the original form of this altered sentence, you are saying that there is "something" that you can do to
achieve the result of a pleasant day. My altered form is saying that the thing that you want to do is spend every single day pleasantly. I hope that you understand the difference. If not make a comment and I will try to explain it better.
Conclusion: Your text is very good. You have a good command of English and you produced quite a large first introduction.
I would not worry about your current age - see this article for a person who didn't let age bother him https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frank_Lloyd_Wright
And from my own extended family, my mother's aunt married at 42 and raised 3 children from that age. She is a bit unusual though as although she is now 80, if you passed in the street, you might take her for being in her mid-30's. She and her younger husband look like grandfather 할아버지 and grandaughter 손녀딸
By the way, I see that you like climbing -- it's a great sport isn't it !
My life.
I got married when i was 22. It was a very early marriage comparing compared with to my friends. After i graduated unversity in February, I made up it and settled in April. That time i just followed what my honey wanted. I believed he would be more mature than me. Because we have a 7 years gap. He wanted to marry soon at that time. and now it's been 22years past. Sometimes I regret for losing my 20s. I did not get any chance to do follow make my dream. I had to focus on growing raising my children. I always give this advice to my daughters like this " First of all, try to make your follow your dream"
I hope that my daugters will be more indepence independant than me. But I do not regret my whole my life. I am satisfied with current my life. I know. When i choose one thing, there is another side at the some same time. If I did not marry that time, I might regret that, too. I think life is very interesting. I really wonder what will happen to me. There is only one thing i can do to spend a every single day pleasantly.
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