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My life. I got married when i was 22. It was very early marriage comparing with my friends. After i graduated unversity in February, I made up it in April. That time i just followed what my honey wanted. I believed he would be mature than me. Because we have 7 years gap. He wanted to marry soon at that time. and now it's been 22years past. Sometimes I regret for losing my 20s. I did not get any chance to make my dream. I had to focus on growing my children. I always advice to my daughters like this " First of all, try to make your dream" I hope that my daugters will be more indepence than me. But I do not regret whole my life. I am satisfied with current my life. I know. When i choose one thing, there is another side at the some time. If I did not marry that time, I might regret, too. I think life is very interesting. I really wonder what will happen to me. There is only onething i can do to spend a every single day pleasantly.

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My life.

I was married when I was 22. It was an very early marriage compared to my friends. After I graduated University in February, I made up it in April. That time Then I just followed what my honey wanted. I believed that  he would be more mature than me. Because we have  7 years gap. He wanted to marry soon at that time and now it's been 22 years past. Sometimes I regret for losing my 20s. I did not get any chance to make achieve  my dream. I had to focus on growing raising my children. I always advice to my daughters like this " First of all, try to make your dream"
I hope that my daugters will be more independent than me. But I do not regret whole my whole life. I am satisfied with current my current life. I know that when I choose one thing, there is another side at the some time. If I did not marry  then, I might have regretted that too. I think life is very interesting. I really wonder what will happen to me. There is only one thing I can do and that is to spend a every single day pleasantly.

 

Notes: Most English speakers use the verb "got". When I was at school, my English teacher hated using that verb. It was the unwary student that used it.

So "I got married when i was 22" ->  "I was married when I was 22"

But you were not wrong to use "got" , it is just my early schooling kicking in. :-)

Make sure to use I instead of i when referring to yourself.

 

I made up it in April -- not sure what you mean here.

my honey - unusual usage in written form for an English speaker, it is more common when speaking.

 

more mature -- you are making a comparison so you use words like - more, less, almost as

 

Because we have 7 years gap - I know what you mean here. You could also use "because we have an age difference of seven years"

or "because he is seven years older than me". Notice that I wrote seven instead of the charachter 7 - that is preferred in writing.

 

and now it's been 22 years past.  I removed the full stop at the end of the previous sentence, and is a connector so it joins the two sentences. I also removed past.

You normally see just " and now it's been 22 years" . You could also write "and now 22 years have passed"

 

There is only one thing I can do and that is to spend a every single day pleasantly. In the original form of this altered sentence, you are saying that there is "something" that you can do to

achieve the result of a pleasant day. My altered form is saying that the thing that you want to do is spend every single day pleasantly. I hope that you understand the difference. If not make a comment and I will try to explain it better.

 

Conclusion: Your text is very good. You have a good command of English and you produced quite a large first introduction.

I would not worry about your current age - see this article for a person who didn't let age bother him https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frank_Lloyd_Wright

 

And from my own extended family, my mother's aunt married at 42 and raised  3 children from that age. She is a bit unusual though as although she is now 80, if you passed in the street, you might take her for being in her mid-30's. She and her younger husband look like grandfather 할아버지  and grandaughter  손녀딸

 

By the way, I see that you like climbing -- it's a great sport isn't it !

 

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I understand now -- you graduated Uni in February and married in April. Two months after graduation. I thought that you were referring to the present year. My mistake. It was the "made it up" wording that confused me. So what did you do at Uni ?
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Nice story :) Thanks.
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My life.

I got married when i was 22. It was a very early marriage comparing compared with to my friends. After i graduated unversity in February, I made up it and settled in April. That time i just followed what my honey wanted. I believed he would be more mature than me. Because we have a 7 years gap. He wanted to marry soon at that time. and now it's been 22years past. Sometimes I regret for losing my 20s. I did not get any chance to do follow make my dream. I had to focus on growing raising my children. I always give this advice to my daughters like this " First of all, try to make your follow your dream"
I hope that my daugters will be more indepence independant than me. But I do not regret my whole my life. I am satisfied with current my life. I know. When i choose one thing, there is another side at the some same time. If I did not marry that time, I might regret that, too. I think life is very interesting. I really wonder what will happen to me. There is only one thing i can do to spend a every single day pleasantly.

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