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Practicing ~려고 하다 & ~라고 & ~ㄹ(을) 뻔 했다^^ -우리 교실에서 자면 안돼요. 근데, 이번 수업에서 아주 피근해서 잠 잘 뻔 했는데, 옆에 앉는 친구가 나한테 '수업중에 자면 안돼! 이러나!'라고 했어요. 그래서 수업끝까지 잠 못 잤어요ㅠㅠ (It's not allowed for us to sleep during classes but, that class I was so tired that I almost fell asleep. It's when my fried sitting next to me whispers to me "you can't sleep. wake up". so, I woke up and I couldn't sleep until the class had finished. -난 집에 가려고 하는데 길에서 친구를 만나고 그 친구가 '어! 커피 한잔 마시자'라고 해서 난 집에 가기말고(대신) 우리 친구랑 커피 마셨어요. 어! 오늘도 집에서 늦게 들어왔어요ㅠㅠ I was going home when I met one of my friends who told me "Hey! Let's go drink a cup of coffee" so instead of just going home, I drank coffee with him/her. And, again I went back home late as usual. In this notebook I'm trying to practice ~려고 하다 & ~라고 & ~ㄹ(을) 뻔 했다 =D So if there is any better way to express these sentences please teach me how to say it^^ Thanks in forward^^

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Practicing ~려고 하다 & ~라고 & ~ㄹ(을) 뻔 했다^^

-우리는 교실에서 자면 안_돼요. 근데, 이번 수업에서을 듣다가 아주 피근곤해서 잠_잘 뻔 했는데, 옆에 앉는은 친구가 나한테 '수업_중에 자면 안_돼! 이러일어나!'라고 했어요. 그래서 수업이_끝날 때까지 잠을 못 잤어요ㅠㅠ
(It's not allowed for us to sleep during classes but, that class I was so tired that I almost fell asleep. It's when my fried sitting next to me whispers to me "you can't sleep. wake up". so, I woke up and I couldn't sleep until the class had finished.
-난 집에 가려고 하있었는데 길에서 친구를 만나났고 그 친구가 '어! 커피 한잔 마시자'라고 해서 난 집에 가기말고지 않고 (대신) 우리 친구랑 커피를 마셨어요. 어! 오늘도 집에서 늦게 들어왔어요ㅠㅠ
I was going home when I met one of my friends who told me "Hey! Let's go drink a cup of coffee" so instead of just going home, I drank coffee with him/her. And, again I went back home late as usual.

In this notebook I'm trying to practice ~려고 하다 & ~라고 & ~ㄹ(을) 뻔 했다 =D So if there is any better way to express these sentences please teach me how to say it^^ Thanks in forward^^

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Thanks for correcting my English too^^ U know I was trying to tell a story^^ It seems that it turned out so long sorry =D
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*Thanks in advance :) It's great to see another Korean student! For ~말고, when you use it with a verb, the structure is V+지 말고. 예) 울지 말고 말해보세요. Please try talking, don't cry. Also, that is an extreeeemely long first sentence in the second paragraph! I would suggest breaking up any sentence that long in any language.

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