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My bad day. Today I have an aggument with my girlfriend. I have not talked to her from this morning. Without talking with her I feel that there is something missing today. Both she and I are kind of restive. None of us wants to admit the mistake, no one wants to say "I'm sorry". I wish that we would back to normal. I want to confess but I did that many times before. I just want her to realize her wrong, but she is more wilfull than I thought. Until now, we do not say a word. I am really confused now. P/S: Hi guys, this is the first time I come here, the first time i write some thing on a website too. I think I am really bad in community, especially in English. Hopefully you guys can correct my entry also feel free to share your thinking about my "today". Regards

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My bad day.

Today I had  an argument with my girlfriend. I have not talked to her since this morning. When I'm not  talking to her I feel that there is something missing today. Both she and I are kind of restive (tense). Neither of us wants to admit the mistake, neither one wants to say "I'm sorry". I wish that we would get back to normal. I want to confess to her but I did that many times before. I just want her to realize her wrong doing, but she is more wilfull stubborn than I thought. So far, we didn't exchange a word. I am really confused now.
P/S: Hi guys, this is the first time I come here, the first time i have written something on a website too. I think I am really bad in a community, especially in English. Hopefully you guys can correct my entry also feel free to share your thinking about my "today". Regards

 

Your english is very good, and your 'today' is something that happens to everyone in a relationship.

Forgiveness is key. :)

 

Hope you get back together as soon as possible! 

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My bad day.

Today I havehad an argument with my girlfriend. I have not talked to her from since this morning. Without talking with her, I feel that like there is something missing today. Both she and I are kind of restive. None neither of us wants to admit the to making a mistake, no one wants to say "I'm sorry". I wish that we would were back to normal. I want to confess but I did have done that many times before. I just want her to realize her wrong-doing, but she is more wilfull than I thought. Until now, we do not say have not said a word. I am really confused now.

 

Not a good day! The english is good. There are some mistakes with tenses. Try to stick to one tense throughout.

 

Overall it is very understandable - well written and well structured. Keep practicing! :)

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My bad day.

Today I have an aggument with my girlfriend. I have not talked to her from this morning. Without talking with her I feel that there is something missing today. Both she and me are kind of restive. None of us wants to admit the mistake, no one wants to say "I'm sorry". I wish that we would back to normal. I want to confess but I did that many times before. I just want her to realize her wrong, but she is more wilfull than I thought. Until now, we do not say a word. I am really confused now.
P/S: Hi guys, this is the first time I come here, the first time i write some thing on a website too. I think I am really bad in community, especially in English. Hopefully you guys can correct my entry also feel free to share your thinking about my "today". Regards

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I'm sorry to hear your story. Would you mind If I give you some advice? In my opinion, one of you guys should apologize to the other whoever made mistakes first, then try to calm yourselves down and discuss the problem together or share your opinions. I think we shouldn't think too much about whose fault it is, but the main point is to recognize the flaws of each other and fix them (peacefully). :D Sorry if I was impolite or something.

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