Talk about your city pt 1 [I'm offering another perspective on correcting this text because sometimes it's helpful to see how different native speakers respond with corrections.]

Yesterday I talkedspoke with my English teacher and she gave me an homework assignment: write about your city. In this daysToday, I will post part of my article. [Intendevi "On this day," "In the next few days," o "In the coming days"?]

Talking about my city for me is very hard for me. I shall want to write moremany things but I don’t want to dogive a simpley description of Iit.
I live in the north suburb of Naples, in a quarter called Scampia. Unfortunately, Iit is famous for the decay and the high level of crimeinality caused by the drug trade of drugs. But after the last cammora’s feud finished in 2005, the sState and Nnonprofit organizations ["nonprofit organizations," or "a nonprofit organization"] are fighting forto improve the quarter. In fact, now the sale of drugs ishas decreased and the police closed some leaveabandoned buildings structure where the drugs addicts went to do drugsfor druging, and the next year the uUniversity of Naples Federico 2°nd will open a new university branch here/there/nearby.
LatelyRecently, the Italian digital satellite television, SKY, makemade a television series based ton the book "Gomorra" ofby Roberto Saviano. I think that this serial gives an horrible ideaimpression of Scampia and that incites to the violence because the main charachter seems immortal.

I’m proud and happy to live here even through Iit don’tdoesn't offer me moremany opportunitiesy because Iit permits me to discovery the real value of life and to never give up.

This isHere are two photos of Scampia [Soltanto una photo arriva.]

[Napoli is a very special and wonderful city despite its problems, and I hope that you continue to see improvements over time.]

Talk about your city pt 1

Yesterday I talked with my English teacher and she gave me an assignment homework: write about your city. In this days Over the next few days I will post part of my article.

Talking about my city for me is very hard for me. I shall want to write more thing many things but I don’t just want to describe it. do a simply description of It.

I live in the northern suburb of Naples, in a quarter called Scampia. Unfortunately it is famous for the decay and the high level of criminality caused by the trade of drugs/ drug trade. But after the last cammora’s feud finished in 2005, the state and Nonprofit organization are fighting for to improve the quarter. In fact now the sale of drugs is on the decrease and the police closed some leave?? structures where the drugs addicts went for druging?? (rehab?), and the next year the university of Naples Federico 2° will open a new university branch.

Lately Recently/ Some time ago/ A while back the Italian digital satellite television SKY make made a television series based to on the book "Gomorra" of by Roberto Saviano. I think that this serial series gives a(n) horrible idea of Scampia and that incites to the violence because the main character seems immortal.

I’m proud and happy to live here even through it don’t doesn't offer me more many opportunities because it permits me to discovery discover the real value of life and to never give up.

This is These are two photos of Scampia

Fai attenzione con i plurali. Ricorda che in inglese di solito si fa un plurale aggiungendo una "s". Oltre questo, ben fatto ;-)

Talk about your city pt About Your City Part 1

Yesterday, I talked with my English teacher and she gave me an homework: write about your city. In this days today I will post part of my article.

Talking about my city for me is very hard for me. I shall want to write more, thing but I don’t want to do a simply description of It to simply give a description of my city.
I live in the a north northern suburb of Naples, in a quarter called Scampia. Unfortunately, It it is famous for the decay and the high level of criminality caused by the trade of drugs drug trade. But, after the last cammora’s feud finished in 2005, the state and Nonprofit nonprofit organization organizations are fighting for to improve the quarter. In fact, now the sale of drugs is has decrease and the police closed some leave a structure where the drugs addict addicts went for druging doing drugs, and the next year the university of Naples Federico 2° will open a new university branch.
Lately Recently, the Italian digital satellite television station SKY make made a television series based to the book "Gomorra" of by Roberto Saviano. I think that this serial series give an gives a horrible idea impression of Scampia and that incite to the violence because the main charachter seem charter seems immortal.

I’m proud and happy to live here even through It don’t it doesn’t offer me more opportunity opportunities, because It permits me to discovery discover the real value of life and to never give up.

This is Here are two photo of Scampia.

A very nice effort Roberto; despite the mistakes, I really enjoyed learning and reading about Naples, and where you live. Every place may have its good and bad sides, but it’s up to you as an individual to make the best of the situation you find yourself in, and it seems you are doing that, so good for you my friend! If you have any questions like always, feel free to ask!