The most interesting job in the world.
Talk about the job that you have or would like to have. What do you think is the most interesting job in the world? If you could create your own business, what would it be?
In the first place, I have to say that I love my job. I´m an architect technician and I work in a construction company. We make protected buildings (social housing) to poor people who haven´t got anything to eat.
Although there are other jobs which could be interesting too, for example, a doctor. I think being a doctor it would be very interesting because you could care other people.
However, I think the most interesting job in the world is teacher. I think I´d like to teach children or teenagers. For example, I could teach technical drawing in a high school but if I could create my own business, I would create a construction company. I´d like to create a great company to can make big buildings and so I could go down in history. It would be my dream.
Could you correct me, please?
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The most interesting job in the world.
Talk about the job that you have or would like to have. What do you think is the most interesting job in the world? If you could create your own business, what would it be?
In the first place, I have to say that I love my job. I´m an architect technician and I work in/for a construction company. We make protected buildings (social housing) to for poor people who haven´t got anything to eat.
Although there are other jobs which could be interesting too, for example, becoming a doctor. I think being a doctor it would be very interesting because you could care for other people.
However, I think the most interesting job in the world is to become a teacher. I think I´d like to teach children or teenagers. For example, I could teach technical drawing in a high school but if I could create/have my own business, I would create a construction company. I´d like to create a great company to that can make big buildings and so I could go down in history. It would be my dream.
Could you correct me, please?
Muy bien hecho! Hay sólo algunas errores, pero en general es muy bueno!
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The most interesting job in the world.
Talk about the job that you have or would like to have. What do you think is the most interesting job in the world? If you could create your own business, what would it be?
Firstly, I have to say that I love my job. I´m an architect technician and I work for a construction company. We make protected buildings (social housing) for poor people who have very little/nowhere to live (-who don't have anything to eat is... too irrelevent from the point. Either of these options are better for flow).
Although There are other jobs which could be interesting too: I think being a doctor it would be very rewarding because you are caring for other people.
However, I think the most interesting job in the world is teacher. If I was a teacher, I think I´d like to teach children or teenagers. I could teach technical drawing in a high school.
Changed paragraph here, as this is on different subject)
If I could create my own business I would create a construction company. I´d like to create a great company to can make big buildings and so I could go down in history. It would be my dream.
Could you correct me, please?
muy bueno! :)
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Thank you!
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Very few mistakes,
'I work in a construction company' , it's not a mistake but as a native speaker I would naturally say 'I work for'.
'protected buldings to poor people' - protected buildings FOR poor people
It is better not to use 'although' at the beginning of a sentence. You can use it to connect ideas within a sentence 'I like being an architect technician although it would be nice to be a doctor' but not on its own. Instead, you could say 'On the other hand' or 'Having said that' or 'However'.
'the most interesting job in the world is teacher' - it is better to say the most interesting job in the world is 'being a teacher' or 'being an architect' or 'being a lawyer'.
I hope you find this useful. On the whole it's very good. Please post if you have any questions.
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