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Another Day Goes By I started packing my stuffs today preparing to set off. I had dinner at my Uncle's home at night. After dinner my Uncle and my parents drunk wine with my Uncle's colleagues. I don't drink wine, so I went home early and listened to some musics. It was nothing special today.

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Another Day Goes By

I started packing my stuffs today preparing to set off. I had dinner at my uncle's house at night**. After dinner, my uncle and my parents drank wine with my some of my uncle's colleagues. I don't drink wine, so I went home early and listened to some musics.Today  was nothing special.

** "house" would be more appropriate than "home" in this case. It sounds a bit strange to say "at night" but I did not make a correction because I am not sure what time it took place. You could say something like "I had dinner at my uncle's house tonight/ last night/ that night" depending on when it happened.
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Another Day Goes By

I started packing my stuffs today preparing to return again to school. I had dinner at my Uncle's home at night.  After dinner my Uncle and my parents drank wine with my Uncle's colleagues. I don't drink wine, so I went home early and listened to some musics. Today was nothing special. today.

stuff is plural
music is plural
drunk >>>>  falling all over and passing out -- drank too much
drank>>>past tense of to drink

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