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Bad Style Of Doing Things -- I Think It's Unpolite Yesterday, it's almost the time to get off work. Our boss came out of his room to say " We have dinner together in a palce, this night " . He did that again, he always does that . He likes to do some things when the time is coming , then he tells us. I don't like that very much, I think it's unpolite . So , when this thing happens , I am few to go with them , Because I had my plan . I have been here for 5 years, he never changed this . Of course , it's his style of doing things . I never talked about this to him , he is our boss , but I can keep my thinking . During the working time , whatever , I do stuff what he wants . But after getting off work , I do things what I want . But I still want to say one word " As a human, at least , you should respect others " .

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Bad Habits -- I Think It's Impolite

Yesterday, it's was almost the time to get off work when our boss came out of his room to say " We're have dinner together at his place tonight " . He did that again, he always does this! He likes to do some things when the time is coming , then he tells us. I don't like this at all. very much, I think it's very impolite . So , when this thing happens I won't go with them, you see...I have a plan.

I've been here for 5 years, and in all this time he's never changed his ways. Of course,  it's his style of doing things. I never talked to him about this because of course, he's our boss, but I still think it's impolite.   During the working hours, I do stuff what he wants me to do . But after getting off work , I do things what I want  to do.

I just want to say, " As a human, at least , you should respect others "

Yes, you should! In the USA this is very disrespectful!  The only way to stop it is
to meet with all the others in your office and decided everyone will say they cannot go.
You must do this every time or he will never learn.  You can also leave a note
on his desk about "how the office feels about this" < but type it do not write it...
he may recogize your writing.  Don't lose your job though ㅋㅋ.  I'm  just saying
I support you and agree with you.  We marry our wives / and our husbands -
not our bosses!  lol  Soon this will take time from your family - that is even more
unfair.

this night <<<< no  
  tonight >>>yes
you see  = when explaining something

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