One Day Outing
I got up early yesterday, and I went out to drink Morning Tea with my parents in the suburb. We ordered a lot of pastries and snacks, and I was almost too full to walk after drinking Morning Tea. After that my Mom called my Uncle and Aunt out.
Before long they were arrived, and we took a walk at a public park. They chatted something about their lives with my parents when they were walking, and they seemed having fun, and so did I.
After lunch we went home. I went out to get a hair cut, and then I went to the mall with my parents in the evening. I think I had a really nice time!
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A One Day Outting
I got up early yesterday and I went out to drink morning tea with my parents in the suburbs. We ordered a lot of pastries and snacks, and I was almost too full to walk afterward. After that my Mom called my Uncle and Aunt and asked them to meet us.Before long they
After lunch we went home. I went out to get a hair cut, and then I went to the mall with my parents in the evening. I think I had a really nice time!
Wow that last part was fantastic! Like a native English speaker!
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lol , yeah.
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YAY FOR MORNING TEA :3 SO CUTE
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