Nice to meet u you:)

Hi, everyone.
It is my first time to write writing here.
I hope I can learn to speak English very well and I want to visit all over the world.
Can I talking to me? (I am not sure what you meant here. Did you mean to say "Can I talk to someone?" i'm sorry if I am wrong)
I want to learn English!

RED- Words/phrases that are wrong.
GREEN- Words that I would use to replace wrong words/phrases.
ORANGE- Words that aren't incorrect but could be replaced with better words.
YELLOW- Places where I added punctuation.
BLUE- When I am not sure of your meaning.

I hope that this is helpful. Good luck! :)