Buffet Dinner Again
For the reason that I stayed home all day long the day before yesterday, I went out to have buffet dinner with my parents last night. We sat down, ordered food, and then we picked different sauces and stirred them into together.
We ate and talked, and suddently, I noticed that two women sat nest to us. They talked out loud. They seemed like two staffs because they were talking about their daily issues of their company. I thought they were very talktive, which's what I should learn from them. Well, I felt great for that night.
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Another Buffet Dinner AgainI stayed home all day long the day before yesterday. I ate a buffet style dinner with my parents last night at a restaurant. We sat down, ordered food, and then we picked different sauces and stirred them
For the reason that into together.
We ate and talked and suddently I noticed that two women who were sitting next to us. They were talking out loudly. I thought maybe they worked together because they were talking about work together. I thought they were very talktive. I'd like to become very talkative too. I had a good time.
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Haha! Thanks, and I wish you were there too. :D
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aww why wasn't I invited? >.<
sounds like you had fun ^^
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