Upper Class

Recently I have been watching a TV play series/show called "Upper Class" which tell us two stories about people from different social classes. One story is a very rich girl who wants to be independent by herself 1*instead of by relying on her family. She works secretly for in2* a supermaket as a food saleswoman. A man who is from poor family and also works there knows her real background and elaborately gets close to her. After a time of working in the supermaket, the girl falls in love with the man without knowing his true intention. The other sotry tells us another girl whose friend is the rich girl who falls in love with the boss of the supermaket. The boss, of course, is a rich man. Unfortunately, his lover is from a lower class. The boss's mother refuses to accept their relationship and creates barriers especially to the girl. Thankfully, the all four persons3* fight for their happiness even though4* despite these obstacles. Actually, there are merits and dismerits of each social class. It would be great if the lovers eventually become spouses. If you want to know what happened afterwards about the stories...please search on line by yourself. Because I haven't finished the TV play series5* yet. Hahaha!

1* or - who wants to depend only on herself

2* work for + name of company - eg He works for Microsoft.

3* 'persons' exists but is a formal expression.

4* even though + phrase / despite + noun - eg even though there are a lot of obstacles

5* 'TV play' exists but is different to what you mean(at least in my European English). It is often the adaptation of a theatre play. It usually lasts for one episode.

Well written. Errors are few and do not impede the expalantion of what you want to say. It can be hard to relate clearly a story and here you have explained it concisely and well.