Search from various English teachers...
China flagMy heart will go on
The Doctor's Bad Attitude Today is the day to see doctors again,because the weather is windy,my wife just recovered form a cold ,so we went to the pregnant women's hospital by taxi. When the B exceeds test was over, my wife read the report and asked the doctor which position our baby was,(Beacuse the position's description she saw was ROT,we don't know what the pose was exactly, we just know our baby's head is going downwards),the doctor's attitude was very bad,first her face was very bad to look, and she said: the place is where to take B exceeds,is not the place where to have lessons.So my wife felt very unhappy,we went to the Complaints Department to tell the leader the fact, she promised us she would do something, and give us a call to reply. We chose the hospital to do test and have our baby,I never thought the hospital's doctors have that attitude. Everyone knows,pregnant women are easy to be a upset mood,the doctor had that attitude, ask my wife how to accpet that.How can she serve other pregnant women well? Of course ,now we feel better, because it's not worth to angry with that ,our baby is important.Oh,by the way ,another doctor saw the B exceeds' report, she said our baby is bigger than usual baby again, Baby's head is 9.3 cm from the left to the right,today is the first day of 34 weeks. Hey ,baby ,I am your father , can you grow a little slower? if that you can be born by normal childbirth ,if your head is too big ,you will be born by cesarean.Although we say follow the fate, but you know, the best way to be born is normal childbirth.Come on ,baby!

Corrections · 7

0
Sarah, thanks for that. Below, I'm offering the opporunity to LEARN, not just be corrrected (which is actually pretty lazy learning) ... so I hope real learning happens here. ^^
0

I did NOT correct this for you. I did something that a GOOD teacher should do.  I just  showed you where your BIG errors are.

The essay is now divided into sentences.
You must learn at least these 4 things about BASIC English grammar and make the, changes., resubmit it in this format / sentence by sentence –
and I will correct “better way to say” part.
This is learning.
 
Do not write in paragraph form until you know how to make sentences.
__________________________________


Your Main Problems in English are:
 
 
Capitalization >>> The first word of each sentence is capitalized.
Punctuation >>>   The end of each sentence has a period. > .
                              No spaces before a comma. One space after a comma.
                               One or two (your choice) spaces after a period (I prefer two)
Spacing >>> Spacing errors are underlined. 
Spelling errors >>> Are in blue Use a dictionary.

Fix the four errors above, in the lesson below. 
Resubmit your fixes in another post and then, I'll correct the "better way to say" content.
 
 
 
Today is the day to see doctors again, <<< what goes here?
 
because the weather is windy,my wife just recovered form a cold ,so we went to the pregnant women's hospital by taxi. <<<< The first letter of the first word of a sentence is what?

continue...

When the B exceeds test was over, my wife read the report and asked the doctor which position our baby was,
 
(Beacusethe position's description she saw was ROT,we don't know what the pose was exactly, we just know our baby's head is going downwards),
 
the doctor's attitude was very bad,
 
first her face was very bad to look, and she said: the place is where to take B exceeds,is not the place where to have lessons.
 
So my wife felt very unhappy,we went to the Complaints Department to tell the leader the fact, she promised us she would do something, and give us a call to reply.

We chose the hospital to do test and have our baby,
 
I never thought the hospital's doctors have that attitude.
 
Everyone knows,pregnant women are easy to be a upset mood,
the doctor had that attitude, ask my wife how to accpet that.
 
How can she serve other pregnant women well?

Of course ,now we feel better, because it's not worth to angry with that ,our baby is important
 
Oh,by the way ,another doctor saw the B exceeds' report, she said our baby is bigger than usual baby again,
 
Baby's head is 9.3 cm from the left to the right,today is the first day of 34 weeks.
Hey ,baby ,I am your father , can you grow a little slower?
 
 if that you can be born by normal childbirth ,if your head is too big ,you will be born by cesarean.
 
Although we say follow the fate, but you know, the best way to be born is normal childbirth.
 
Come on ,baby!
 
0
Hi there. I agree with Nancy. This is too hard to read. :( Try writing shorter notebook entries, and fix the simple mistakes (spacing, spelling); then you'll get more responses, I think.
0
If correcting an essay takes more time than writing the essay did - that's called "teaching upside-down". I try to avoid that situation.
0
...not consistently correct spacing < correction.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today