Bad day
Hi everybody!
Today, in my country it was a rainy day. All the Day was dark. In my job, everybody seem angry and bored,althoght today is monday. I hope that tomorrow will be a nice day. Now, I go to work, really I'm writing this while my workday.
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Bad day - ( a normal day in UK ;-) )
Hi everybody!
Today, in my country it's a rainy day. All the day has been dark and cloudy. At my work place, everybody seem angry and bored, although today is just Monday. I hope that tomorrow will be better. Now, I'm going to work. Actually I'm writing this during my working hours.
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Bad day (We capitalize all the words in a title except for: for, and nor, but, yet, so, and prepositions.)
Bad Day
Hi everybody!
Today, in my country it was a rainy day. (remove comma)
Today in my country it was a rainy day.
All the Day was dark.
It was dark all day.
In (At) my job, everybody seem (seemed) angry and bored,althoght.(Although) today is monday (Monday). I hope that tomorrow will be a nice day. Now, I go to work, I'm going to work now. really I'm writing this while my workday. (I'm writing this while I'm working or I'm writing this during my workday.)
I hope this video helps you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3957TbatjPg
We always capitalize days of the week.
Well done.
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