¿Quíen Quien puede ayudarme a mejorar mi español?

Hola todo el mundo, estoy aprendiendo español y quiero hablar con personas que practican hablan bién bien la lingua lengua. Por otro lado, puedo ayudaros con la lingua lengua francesa . A mi mí me gusta España, la paella, el Flamenco y las cancíones canciones españolas. Pienso que España es un país rico y abierto al mundo.
Para mí,es importante hablar y escribir en español para mejorar la lingua y communicar comunicarme no sólo con los látinoamericanos, sino también con los españoles .

Hi Cyrine. I'm going to give you an xplanation of my corrections:

Quién: The accent is in the e, and it have an accent because you emphasize in the persons you are asking. If you use quien without speak about a person directly, it won't have an accent. Ex: No sé de quien es esto.

Lingua: In spanish this word is Lengua

Ayudar-os: In that sentence, as you speak that you can help to others (vosotros) you have to add a complement pronoun of the verb, and the complement in the 2nd person of the plural is -os.When the verb is in infinitive you put it after the verb in the same word. But if you congujate the verb the pronoun go before, not togheter with the verb. Ex: Yo os puedo ayudar, yo puedo ayudaros.

Mí: In that case mí have an accent because it works like a personal pronoun. If it was a posesive, it wouldn't have accent.   Ex ¿Esto es para mí?   /  Te invito a mi casa:

Canciones: canciones doen't have an accent because is a "palabra llana" (it mean that the accent is in the penultimate syllabe) and the rule of "palabras llanas" says that it doesn't have an accent when the word finish in -n, -s or vowel. Ex of a llana that have accent. El lápiz (the pencil)

Rico: Rico in what? Here you should add something more that the adjective rico. Ex: Rico en historia, rico en cultura..
If you don't add nothing more, rico will work as a sustantive and the meaning will be rich (in money). And right now Spain is not rich in money ;)

Para mí: If you want to start a sentence telling something about you you could use para mí (for me). If not the sentence could be a general description for all the people

Comunicar-me: Is it the same that the form ayudar-os. The verb need a complement, and the pronoun for the 1st person of the singular is me. 

No sólo: Here I guess you want to say that speak spanish is not only good to communicate with people from Latin América. So you can say no sólo (not only)

con: we need a preposition to make sense in this sentence. We need to add the preposition con (with)

Hi Cyrine! I make a long explanation of each mistake, hope you undestand everything.
As I see you are already able to construct sentences and give them a meaning, but you still have some mistakes, which you should be able to correct by reinforcing some grammar rules. I would be glad to help you and explain you all the areas where you could need help, as the concordance between genres in the sentences, the differences of singular and plural, the personal pronouns, the interrogative pronouns, the reflexives verbs, etc... Feel free to contact me via my teacher profile http://www.italki.com/teacher/2420608
Regards David

 

¿Quíen puede ayudarme  a mejorar mi español?

Hola  a todo el mundo, estoy aprendiendo español y quiero hablar con personas que practican bien la lengua. Por otro lado puedo ayudar con la lengua francesa . A mí me gusta España, la paella, el Flamenco y las cancíones españolas. Pienso que España es un país rico y abierto al mundo. Es importante hablar y escribir en español no solo para mejorar la lengua y communicarnos con los latinoamericanos, sino también con los españoles .