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Interview
Describe a major disappointment in your life.
The main disappointment for me has been the people, because it's really hard to find the honest and kind people.There have been many hypocrites and envious people in my life.
What motivates you?
I think it's a desire to achieve my goals.
What does success mean to you?
It means for me that my work and efforts or talents are appreciated and recognized.
What are your hobbies? What do you like to do in your spare time?
I like to play poker, to make and listen to music, watch television series and movies, and read books.
What do you do for fun?
I attend various concerts, meet up with my friends and go to the cinema.
What is your favourite book?
Movie?
Well it's hard to choose, but let it be "The Master and Margarita." As for movie it's even more difficult. I like different genres and it's very hard to choose one movie.
What would you do if you won the lottery?
I would make my dreams come true. First of all I think I would buy a huge house near the sea in some tropical country for my family.
You've written a good interview. I have The Master and Margarita on my shelf but have never read it. Perhaps I should start it now!
Well done Oxana - this was really great overall!! 2 feedback points:
1 - Be careful to make sure that you write in one tense. There is quite a lot of muddling here between past and present, and at times the present perfect should be used too.
2 - Remember to always have a space after a comma or full stop before you write the next word.
Tom
Interview
Describe a major disappointment in your life.
The main disappointment for me is the people, because it's really hard to find the honest and kind people. There have been were many hypocrites and enviers in my life.
What motivates you?
I think it's a desire to achieve the my goals.
What does success mean to you?
It means for me that my work and efforts or talants were appreciated and recognized.
What are your hobbies? What do you like to do in your spare time?
I like to play poker,to make and listen to music, watch series and movies, read books.
What do you do for fun?
I attend various concerts, meet up with my friends and go to the cinema.
What is your favourite book? Movie?
Well it's hard to choose, let's say it be "The Master and Margarita". As for a movie it's even more difficult, I like different genres and it's unrealistic to choose one movie.
What would you do if you won the lottery?
I would make my dreams come true. First of all I think I would buy a huge house near the sea in some tropical country for my family.
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