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Let us be friends I'm trying to learn English better ,hope I can communicate with friends better, I like chating with different countries and cultures people ,then I can good to know the world, learn about the world , I also like to teach Chinese, ,I think it is very interesting and meaningful. And I hope that through to let more people know about China ,spread Chinese culture. I like to make friends , hope that we can become friends. 我在努力的学习英语,希望能够更好的和各国的朋友交流,我喜欢与不同国家、不同文化的人交流,这样我可以好的认识世界,了解世界;我也喜欢教中文,我觉得那很有意思也很有意义,而且我希望通过的能够让更多的人了解中国,认识中国,传播中国的文化;同时我也喜欢交朋友,希望能与你成为朋友。

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Let's us be friends!

I'm trying to learn English better and hope I can communicate with friends better. 
I like chatting with people from different countries and cultures people, then I can good to know the world, learn more about the world ,
I also like to teach Chinese, I think it is very interesting and meaningful.
And I hope that through to I can let more people know about China and spread Chinese culture.
I like to make friends and hope that we can become friends.
我在努力的学习英语,希望能够更好的和各国的朋友交流,我喜欢与不同国家、不同文化的人交流,这样我可以好的认识世界,了解世界;我也喜欢教中文,我觉得那很有意思也很有意义,而且我希望通过的能够让更多的人了解中国,认识中国,传播中国的文化;同时我也喜欢交朋友,希望能与你成为朋友。

Good job. :) Here are my suggestions:

1. "And" is generally not placed at the beginning of a sentence.
2. The way sentences connect in Chinese and English is a little bit different, so be sure to pay close attention to that.
3. I tried to make only small changes to your writing, but for the phrase, "这样我可以好的认识世界,了解世界," I suggest translating that as: "that way I can get to know and understand the world better."

加油!


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