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Journey of south moutains May 19th, 5 o’clock on Tuesday morning. I was on the way to the South Mountains. After one hour of cycling with photo taking, I reached my destination. This place hadn’t changed a bit over the last five years. The air that morning was fresh and clear, it smelled like green trees and wild flowers. And there was a neat path through the mountains and over their tops. I was deep in mountain for many kilometers, and my surroundings were dark green. At last I reached the top of the mountain. I could see the sky and land around me. The sky was clear and blue ,and it seemed so closed that I felt I could almost touch it if I raised my hands. The early morning air in the distance looked like thick smoke. And there was a village in sight! What a fantastic view! For several minutes I looked at the blue sky. And I can’t help thinking: Compared to nature, we humans are really humble. In the modern world We often struggle to earn more money to own a bigger house and get a better job. Do we do these things for the comfort and happiness of mankind? No, I don’t think so. Truly , if we spend time and work hard we might get all these things at last. But at that time, will we feel better? No. Unfortunately, We will want to own more ! In the end We’ll feel upset! Man’s desire is endless! Nature has never changed! Happiness is not in the future , but always surrounds us!

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Journey of south moutains

May 19th, 5 o’clock on Tuesday morning.

 

I was on my way to the South Mountains.

After one hour of cycling - taking photos on the way - I reached my destination.

This place hasn’t changed a bit over the last five years.


The air that morning was fresh and clear, it smelled like green trees and wild flowers.
And there was a neat path through the mountains and over their tops. After many kilometers, I was deep in the mountains, and I was surrounded by dark green scenery.

At last I reached the top of the mountain. I could see the sky and the landscape all around me.
The sky was clear and blue ,and it seemed so close that I felt I could almost touch it if I raised my hands.

The early morning air in the distance looked like thick smoke. And there was a village in sight!

What a fantastic view!


For several minutes I looked at the blue sky. And I can’t help thinking:

Compared to nature, we humans are really humble.

In the modern world
We often struggle to earn more money to own a bigger house and get a better job.

Do we do these things for the comfort and happiness of mankind?
No, I don’t think so.

Truly , if we spend time and work hard we might get all these things at last.
But at that time, will we feel better?
No. Unfortunately, We will want to own more !
In the end we’ll feel upset!
Man’s desire is endless!

Nature has never changed!
Happiness is not in the future , but always surrounds us!

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I really enjoyed reading your piece, and I'm very jealous of this beautiful place.

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