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Third year in college This is the third year for my college. Actually it is almost the end of my third year. This semester is really busy. I have a difficult course, final program this semester. I became the leader of international volunteer team. It is a big challenge for me. But I think the bad thing will pass, and good thing will come. I will go to Cambodia this summer. Then I would want to go to Taichung for a child summer camp. In the end of summer, I plan to travel around Taiwan again. And I would like to hitchhike this time. I look forward to the vocation come!!

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Third year in college

This is the third year of college; actually it is almost the end of my third year. This semester has been really busy. I have a difficult course final program this semester. I became the leader of international volunteer team, and it is a big challenge for me. But However, I think the bad things will come to pass and the good things will come. I will go to Cambodia this summer. In the end of summer, I would want to go to Taichung City, Taiwan for a child summer camp. I plan to travel around Taiwan, and I would like to hitchhike this time. I look forward to the vocation vacation to come!

 

Try to describe why your course or being the leader of the international volunteer team was difficult. Try not to use but, and, or because at the beginning of the sentence. It is grammatically correct, but it is not widely used.

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Third year in college

This is my third year in college. In fact, it's almost the end of the semester. It's been really busy. My course is really difficult. I became the leader of the international volunteer team. It's a bit challenging for me. But I know that that it'll all soon pass, and good things will come. I'm going to Cambodia this summer, following Taichung regarding a childrens' summer camp. By the end of this summer, I plan on travelling around Taiwan again with the difference of hitchhiking. I look forward to travelling!!

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