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happy sunday Yesterday was Sunday. Sunday is my favorite day. I went to the church with my family. When I worship to God in the Church I feel happy and peace. I like to listen to a choir. Of course I play the piano with choir, too. btw, Do you like a game "TETRIS"? -.- 한게임 is famous online game site in Korea. Lately I started this game. It's good for stress make low. btw, add. Could you make me to my english name? haha It's gonna be fun.

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A Happy Sunday   < 제목의 중요한 단어가 항상 대문자가 씁니다.

 
Yesterday was Sunday. Sunday is my favorite day.
I went to the church with my family.
When I worship to God in the Church I feel happy and peaceful.
I like to listen to the choir. Of course I play the piano with choir, too. 

By the way,  do you like the game "Tetris"?
한게임 is a famous online game site in Korea.
Lately I started playing this game.
It's a good stress reliever.

btw, add.
Could you suggest an English name for me?
haha That would be fun.  - It's going to be fun.

잘했지만, 대문자사용하는것을배울필요가있어요.
한국어에는경어가있어요, 그리고영어에는대문자문자가있어요.
  영어에는

 'the', 'a', 'an'이란 관사세개가 있습니다. <<< 그들은 공부해야 돼요.
빨간색    = 대문자로써주세요.    Capitalization
파란색   = 정정 & 철자                 Correction & Spelling
녹색        = 더자연스러운방법    More natural / common & Optional
보라색    = 코멘트 / 제안              Comment - Suggestion
 밑줄       = 구두점과 띄어쓰기   Punctuation - Spacing
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Now that I know your Korean name, I would suggest your American name to be "Joan", "Julie" or "June". < I like "June" the best. ^^
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Right. You are very good people !!!
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Tetris game can hurt your wrist when you play it with keyboard .. Plz be careful... ^^
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안녕하세요. 뵙겠습니다! 잘 했습니다! JYKim .... 킴 JY =한국인 성명이 뭐에요? 한국어로 뒨 써주세요? 한국어로 된 작성입니까? 만약 당신은 모든 사람은 볼 수 있는 싶지 않으면, 단 내게 메세지를 보내주세요. Then I will help you with your English name. ^^

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