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What a disgusting custom It's 0:11am right now,I still stay up because of the annoying noise of firecrackers,this spring festival ,I didn't go back to my parents home.On the spring festival eve, I was annoyed by the noise of firecrackers,the noise last about one and a half hours,it ended at 1:45 am, our baby was scared,and keep moving ,kicked my wife's belly.And it happened again,what a disgusting custom,I hate this.I heard that they did that to welcome the rich god.Oh ,I pray those people who set off firecrackers have a bad year, they will lost all their money ,damn custom ,they are nuts!

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What a disgusting custom

It's 0:11am right now,I still stay up because of the annoying noise of firecrackers,this spring festival ,I didn't go back to my parents home.On the spring festival eve, I was annoyed by the noise of firecrackers,the noise last about one and a half hours,it ended at 1:45 am, our baby was scared,and keep moving ,kicked my wife's belly.And it happened again,what a disgusting custom,I hate this.I heard that they did that to welcome the rich god.Oh ,I pray those people who set off firecrackers have a bad year, they will lost all their money ,damn custom ,they are nuts!

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- Titles are capitalized
- I still stay up > I am still awake
- 0:11am is not a time
- Your secnd sentence contains 37 words.  More than 25 words is too long. 
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- god < Names of people (and gods) are capitalized.
- Two spaces bewteen sentences.
- lost (x) lose (o)
- Capitalize names of holidays.
- The past tense of "keep" is "kept"

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