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The George's Ribbon Lots of Russians wear this symbol of the great victory every year on the day of victory. But it's a really debatable moment. Some people think it's just a symbol and you can wear it on your jacket, car, bar or on something else. Other people think that using of this ribbon is a disrespect of the great victory and to the heroes. Every year mass media, bloggers and other Internet users have a really hot discussion about this ribbon. On the one hand, it's a symbol of the great victory and people must think before they put it on your bag, because it's not a toy. On the other hand, it's just a symbol, not even more. If you're really respect this day and the heroes, you can do a lot of good things for the veterans, but not just write angry articles on your live journal.

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Saint George's Ribbon     

Lots of Russians wear this symbol of the great Victory every year on the day of victory. But it's a really debatable moment. Some people think it's just a symbol and you can wear it on your jacket, or put/display it on your car, bar or on something else.
Other people think that using of this ribbon is disrespectful of the great Victory and of the heroes.
Every year the mass media, bloggers, and other Internet users have a really hot discussion concerning this ribbon.
On the one hand, it's a symbol of the great Victory, and people must think before they put it on their bags, because it's not a toy.
On the other hand, it's just a symbol, not anything more. If you're really respect this day and the heroes, you can do a lot of good things for the veterans, but not just write angry articles in your live journal.

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