Can someone help me to correct my story? URGENT

The story is for a class and I have few little time! If someone can could help me, it would be perfect! THANKS!


"Once upon a time there was a boy that who dreamed of flying. Every day, he sadly watched the sky and looked the flight of the birds.

(Boy): I want to be like them, but I can't. I'm only a human.

He allways would always returned at home with pain in his heart.

One day, when while he was walking on the street, he saw a butterfly that was flying close to him. He followed it and suddenly (he) ran into an old woman.

(Boy): - Excuse me.

(Old woman): - Don't worry little boy. I know what do you want.

(Boy): - And what do I want?

(Old woman): - You want to fly.

(Boy): - And how do you know it that?

(Old woman): - Jajaja Ha, ha, ha! I'm a witch and I know a lot of things.

(Boy): - Then... You can make me fly!

(Old woman): - You can fly whenever you want.

(Boy): - No! I can't! I can't fly like a bird.

(Old woman): But you can fly like a human.

(Boy): And how can I do it?

(Old woman): - You only need to use your imagination.

The old woman smiled at the boy and walked away down the street. He thought about the words that the old woman said to him of the old woman and (he) tried to do it what she (had) told him.

He saw looked at the sky other again and (he) flew with his mind away from there the place where he was standing.

(Boy): - I like it. Maybe it's better than flying like a bird."

Good job! :)