Corrections · 1
School
Ok! Let me say that I was not feeling good yesterday so I stayed at home. Then I when went to school today and the school only had about 20 to 30 people there. I was wondering where everyone was and I asked a teacher, and she said most of the students got food poisoning from the food we had the other day. I was dang shocked. Wow so I wasn't the only one who got sick from the nasty school food. I was sad that my friends were not there, but I made the best out of the school day. and I did alot a lot of work and got some of the teacher's lunch, which is always better then than the students' lunch. So I was happy. But I was sad again after because student council was cleared.=(
*Okay I know you probably know this, but you should write "i" capitalized.
**You write too much in one sentence, please try to divide it. If you're imaging reading most of the long sentences, you won't be able to breathe while reading it. Please try to add commas and dots when needed.
I know you're American so my deepest apologize if you feel uncomfortable. However, entries are made to be corrected so I did that anyway. Cheers! :)
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