Hip-hop Songs Can Help Mental Illness

I read an article about how hip-hop can help people recover from the mental illnesses.
I didn't have any idea, why Hip-hop? I like any kind of music except county music, but hip-hop tends to contain unspoken words about sex, violence and drugs.
Cambridge University has a hip-hop therapy program. They believe that the lyrics of hip-hop can reach out to people who have emotional problems. The lyrics seems to be representative of the people who have been going through tough situations. It says that where people want to be, what people want or want to do. Awhile ago I wrote that the contents of hip-hop are negative things, but not only that. It speaks of overcoming hardships and big difficulties also, it also has hopes in it.
I don't think all of the hip-hop can be used for the therapy, but I totally agree with the article.
Music is powerful, especially its lyrics. People can sympathize with it and see hope in their lives.

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Hip-hop songs can help metal illness

I read an article about how hip-hop can help people to recover from the mental illnesses.
I didn't have no any idea, why Hip-hop? (Sounds more natural: I don't have any idea, why hip-hop?) I like any kinds of (choose between: all kinds of or any kind of) music except country music but hip-hop tends to contain unspoken words about sex , violence and drugs.
Cambridge University has a hip-hop therapy. (more natural: Cambridge University has a hip-hop therapy program.) They believe that the lyrics of hip-hop can reach out to people who have emotional problems. The lyrics seems to be representative for the people who have been getting through a tough situation. (more natural: The lyrics seem to be relatable for people who have been going through a tough situation.) It speaks (more natural: It says )where people wants to be, what people wants or wants to do. A while ago I wrote that the contents of hip-hop are negative things but not only that, it speaks of overcoming hardships and big difficulties also, it also has hopes in it.
I don't think all of the hip-hop can be used for the therapy but I totally agree with the article.
Music is powerful, especially it's lyrics. People can sympathize with it and see hopes in their lives.

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