I have been here for half a month

I have been in Shenzhen for half a month, I have made some friends from social networking services. They are friendly and we went out for a meal and shopping. Last nignt, I went out for dinner with a friend. We went to a Thai resturant, the average price was 150 rmb. It was delicious, I really liked green curry,haha. Then we watched a movie in cinema(it is more natural to say movie theater). It was a Chinese action movie and it was cool! When I reach my house it was 1:00 am... I was really tired.... I have just woke up now.haha. I wanted to share the scenery of Shenzhen with you. Have a good day!

Thanks for sharing the story and Shenzhen looks beautiful at night! This was well written :)

I have been here for half month

I have been in Shenzhen for half a month, I have made some friends from social networking services. They are friendly and we went out for a meal and shopping. Yesterday Last nignt, I went out for dinner with a friend. We went to a Thai resturant, the averange spend price is was 150 rmb. It was delicious, I really liked green curry,haha. Then we watched a movie in cinema. It was a chinese action movie and it was cool! When I reach arrived at home it was 1:00 am... I was really tired.... I have just woke up now.haha. I wanted to share the scenery of Shenzhen with you. Have a good day!

真的厉害的故事~

A couple of notes,

When you are writing a paper you shoud have the same tense.

For instances you wrote,

"We went to a Thai resturant, the averange (price) is 150 rmb."

This wrong because 'went' is past tense and 'is' is present tense.

The sentence should be,

"We went to a Thai resturant, the averange (price) was 150 rmb."

'went' = past 'was' = past