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Living two days without Internet
The internet seems to be so important for modern people, especially for the young lived young people who live in the city. Two days ago, the internet system of my college was shut down, and suddenly, the whole school was in a panic. Everybody was looking for something to do because they had no place to use internet. It's unusual seeing so many people on the playground--laughing, talking and jumping. For me, it was so sucked not to be able to play games online with my friends. I didn't want to go out, so I just picked up a book which was put had been on the shelf for a hundred years. About three hours later I felt tired, so I decided to take a walk. I spent one an hour walking around the whole campus which was so ignored by me I would usually ignore. I really found something it interesting in on this campus that I've been hated for such a long time. I felt happy. After the dinner, I finished the book and went to bed early so that and I felt so nice the next day. I also had a good time skating with my bodies buddies for the whole days. But today, I refused to get up after knowing that the reparation of the line line had been repaired, I refused to get up, and watched a movie on the bad bed without having my breakfast. And now, I am writing and and listening to music with on my iPad.
Hi Owen - only minor mistakes. Red markings are grammar and word order corrections and blue markings indicate suggestions where a different phrasing would work better. In any case, it sounds like the internet should break more often...
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