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糟糕的故事
当我还是个孩子的时候,虽然我很勇敢,但是也很愚蠢我很愚蠢,但是也很勇敢。我跟朋友们用假剑或棍棒争取打鬧嬉戲。 (爭取 means to strike for something,especially for opportunities,rewards,victory,and etc.
我很喜欢爬和跳楼(?)。跳樓 usually means jump to death.
我住的地方有一个大湖泊。有一次我的朋友向我挑战跳上湖内中的岩石。 When referring to " in the middle of a lake", we would say 湖中. When referring to "in a lake", we often say 湖裡 instead of 湖內.
它是一个真很小岩石,。我不知道我怎么能做到这一点能不能辦到,但我还是努力嘗试着。
我怎么能做到这一点 does not means that I don't know how to do it. On the contrary, it is usually said when you(speaker) have done something which is incredibly hard and cannot believe it.
当我登陆落地後,我马上就失去了平衡掉进了湖里。 登陸 refers to landing after a long movement.(e.g.,登陸月球、太空船登陸)
我想到了电影大白鲨,嚇得马上游回岸边。我的朋友忍不住笑了起来。当我回到家,我直接进入淋浴沖了澡,因为我不想讓妈妈看到我。但是,当她看到了湿衣服,她很生气。不是因为我湿了,但而是因为我失去弄丟了一之隻凉鞋。真糟糕。
Interesting and coherent story.
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