My last holiday

Last summer my best friend and i went to London to meet our British friend who lives there. We stayed in a very tiny, basic and cheap flat near the Kilburn tube station, which we rented it online. The first day was awful because we arrived very late at Stansted Airport and we waited for our baggages at the baggage reclaim for 45 minutes! Then we were in a hurry because we only could check in till 4 p.m. and the journey takes about 50 min. from the airport to our flat. So we got a cab outside the airport but we found out too late that it is very expensive, too late! Anyway, that night we were going to sleep when my friend discovered that our sheets were dirty! We spent an awful night! The next day we called the staff and immediately they came to bring up new clean sheets cleaned. Also I remember one day when the weather was miserable and I was lying in bed when I looked up and there were a very big spot on the ceiling...it was raining into our bedroom! On the other hand, I had a good time there because we met again our friend again and we made some new friends. and also We also went sightseeing, visited a lot of exhibitions and museums, and we went out every night. It was the second time that I visited London. I think London is a wonderful city where you always have a lot of fun.

My Last Holiday

Last summer my best friend and me went to London to meet our British friend who live there. We stayed in a very tiny, basic and cheap flat near the Kilburn tube station, which we rented it online. The first day was awful because we arrived very late at Stansted airport and we waited for our baggages at the baggage reclaim for 45 min! Then, we were in a hurry because we only could check-in till 4 p.m. and the journey takes about 50 min. from the airport to our flat. So we get a cab outside the airport but we find out which is very expensive, too late! Anyway, that night we was going to sleep when my friend discovered that our sheets were dirty! We spent an awful night! Next day we called the staff and immediatly they came to bring up new sheets cleaned. Also I rember one day when the weather was miserable and I were lying in bed when I looked up and there were a very big spot on the ceiling...it was raining into our bedroom! On the other hand I had a good time there because We met again our friend and we made some new friends and also we went sightseeing, visited a lot of exhibitions and museums and we went out every night. It was the second time that I visited London. I think London is a wonderful city where you always have a lot of fun.

'my best friend and me went to London' : I went to London with my best friend
'who live there' : who lives there
'near the Kilburn tube station' : near Kilburn tube station
'which we rented it online' : which we found online
'our baggages' : our luggage
'we only could' : we could only
'we get a cab' : we took a cab
'we find out which is . . ' : we found out that it is . .
'we was going to sleep' : we were going to sleep
'immediatly they came to bring up new sheets cleaned' :
they brought up new clean sheets immediately/straight away
'Also I rember' : I also remember
'I were lying in bed' : I was lying in bed
'there were a very big spot' : there was a very big spot
'We met again our friend' : we met our friend again
'It was the second time that I visited London.' :
This was the second time that I have visited London.

My last holiday

Last summer my best friend and I went to London to meet our British friend who lives there. We stayed in a very tiny, basic and cheap flat near the Kilburn tube station, which we rented online. The first day was awful because we arrived very late at Stansted airport and we waited for our baggages at the baggage reclaim for 45 min! Then, we were in a hurry because we only could check-in till 4 p.m. and the journey takes about 50 min. from the airport to our flat. So we got a cab outside the airport but we fond out that is very expensive, but too late! Anyway, that night we were going to sleep when my friend discovered that our sheets were dirty! We spent an awful night! Next day we called the staff and immediatly they brought new clean sheets. Also I remember one day when the weather was miserable and I was lying in bed when I looked up and there was a very big spot on the ceiling...it was raining into our bedroom! On the other hand I had a good time there because we met again our friend and we made some new friends and also we went sightseeing, visited a lot of exhibitions and museums and we went out every night. It was the second time that I visited London. I think London is a wonderful city where you always have a lot of fun.