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Changes [non-native speaker correction]
I have choosen it(Chosen what? The topic?) because in my town there werehave been a lot of changes. (I would rather use singular: ...there has been a lot of change)
(Since six years before,) (a bit odd I feel) In the last six years, the town has getgot better in the sense that we have got more comforts.
Currently, Now we have a cycle-lane, new pavement and more lighting.
To me, "currently" makes it sound as if these new things were not planned as permanent. Like "at the moment".
Even, we are regards to the Even the environment has been paid attention to. For this reasons, were put recycle bins and cycle parking have been put up. (a bit of guesswork in the first part. I hope it's what you wanted to express)
I think that the majyor don´t does not need a lot of money to domake these changes.
You mean the mayor. A major is an officer in the military.
What about you? Do you know some/a place which that has changed?
Suburbia is growing and thickening here. Gaps are vanishing. A new supermarket has popped up very close. They finally start building to provide a direct public transport connection from the university to its other branch in the neighbouring town.
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