Immoral Behaviors in Public ~please help me correct the composition,thank you
It's common to see various immoral behaviors in public for most people such as littering, spitting and jumping a queue. I had an experience of seeing a man near window throwing out plastic bag when he ate out his breakfast in the bus. Such a phenomenon exists everyday in our surrounding.
It's universally acknowledged that immoral behaviors in public always exert a negative impact to many aspects. For an individual, what one behaves uncivilizedly will lower others' respect to him to some extend. Furthermore, we are unwilling to make friends to such people for the most part which means bad immoral behavious narrow one's social circles. For society, it will damage the image of a city or a country if it's citizens act impolitely frequently. And there is no denying that our sense of social responsibility could be affected by inappropriate deeds of some people.
Only when we treat this problem, as seriously as it deserves to be treated will we accomplish the first step toward. It is vital to draw up stricter policies for government to publish people who behave uncivilizedly in public. Besides, more public-service advertisements are beneficial to cultivate people's civic consciousness and help them to be good from bottom of their heart. Last but not least, schools and families have obligations to educate students to behave well in public. Via both efforts of all people, our society makes it possible to be better and better.
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Immoral....is too strong a word...have not highlighted the corrections and have removed a couple of words
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Unsociable Behaviors in Public ~please help me correct the composition, thank you
It's common to see various unsociable behavior in public for most people such as littering, spitting and jumping a queue. I had the experience of seeing a man seated near a window throwing out a plastic bag after he ate his breakfast on the bus. Such phenomenon exists everyday in our culture.
It's universally acknowledged that unsociable behavior in public does exert a negative impact to many aspects. For an individual, when one behaves uncivilizedly this lower others' respect for him to some extent. Furthermore, we are unwilling to make friends with such people for the most part this means bad immoral behavious will narrow one's social circles. For a society, it will damage the image of a city and a country if it's citizens act impolitely too frequently. There is no denying that our sense of social responsibility could be affected by inappropriate deeds by some people.
Only when we treat this problem, as seriously as it deserves, will we accomplish the first step . It is vital to draw up stricter policies for government to punish people who behave uncivilizedly in public. Besides, more public-service advertisements are beneficial to cultivate people's civic consciousness and help them to be good from bottom of their hearts. Last but not least, schools and families have obligations to educate students to behave well in public. Via both efforts of all people, our society makes it possible to be better and better.
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