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I brand a new life of my hometown i quited my job in BeiJing to find a new job nearly my hometown to started my 2015 years. it's not easy for me to give up my highler salary in Beijing to come back to my hometown to take a start from the head. However i am so lucky to have this new job now i could return to my home everday by bus . i made this dicision since i have left my home for work for 3 years .it's time to stay at my home to commpany with my family which is most important for me now. i now had a crowd of lovely colleagues, my company mainly deal in textiles. we have various kinds of fabrics of pants for man, i will work hard for my new job to brand a new life of my hometown,please cheer for me LOL.

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I brand make a new life of in my hometown

i quited quit my job in BeiJing to find a new job nearly my hometown to started off my 2015 years. it's not easy for me to give up my highler salary in Beijing to come back to my hometown to take a start from the head beginning again. However i am was so lucky to have this new job now at a place where i could can return to my home everday by bus .
i made this dicision decision since i have left my home for work for 3 years ago .it's time to stay at my home to acommpany with my family which is most important for me now.
i now had have a crowd bunch of lovely colleagues, my company mainly deals in textiles. we have various kinds of fabrics of to make men's pants for man, i will work hard for in my new job to brand make a new life of in my hometown,please cheer for me LOL.

 

PS: Cheering for you! ^_^

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I brand A Brand New Life of in My Hometown

 

i I [英文的「我」非大写不可, 如果不习慣如此, 别人一看就对你偏見是个懶惰虫, 不会尊重你] quited quit [这个字沒有过去式的形状, 英文之难就难於有太多的例外!] my job in Beijing to find a new job nearly my hometown to started [ to 之后的动词不許用过去式 ]my 2015 years. it's not easy for me to give up my a highler salary in Beijing [多餘]to come back to my hometown to take a start from scratch/square one/ the head. However, I am so lucky to have this new job now as Ii could can [不能用过去式在这儿, 因为是事实, 如果用过去式, 意思是你现在不是搭巴士回家了]return to my home everday by bus. . 要注意符号的位置


Three years ago, I had made this the decision since I have left my to leave home for work. for 3 years .It's time to stay at work nearby my home to be commpany accompany with my family. which is They are the most important for to me now.

 

I now had a crowd of lovely many wonderful colleagues. my The company deals mainly deal in textiles. We have various kinds of clothing fabrics. of pants for man,  I will work hard for at my new job. to I have a brand a new life of in my hometown.  Wish me luck!  please cheer for me LOL. [这是中式英文, 正宗英文不是这样表示]

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